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Bracken.

Life is answers.
No questions?
Rain fills my ears.
I can no longer hear anything, but
God is good.

My world filled with roots but no trees,
No opera, no opera.
Hark!

Stop pretending the world is ending.
Stop believing we're still achieving.
Stop attending.
Just stop pretending.

My life filled with all the right answers
To all the right questions,
The opera! No drought!
HARK!
Rain fills my ears.
Silence is broken.
I can hear everything, but
God is still good.

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  • forwardfalling
    June 21, 2007

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    this was a very...fluid piece.there were so many good lines in this I couldn't pick one I liked the most. That really shows that this poem is awesome. very nice work.


  • grrlshadow
    March 22, 2007
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    "My world filled with roots but no trees,
    No opera, no opera.
    Hark!" this is quite a lovely piece of work, i am glad you chose option one! thank you very much for this entry, and best of luck in the contest!