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The Mysteries of the Night

The night is never narrated
Being untold in our homes
Infinite knowledge never being known
Hiding in all our minds
Suppressed because we are afraid

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Neophyte

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  • crimsonfury
    March 23, 2007

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    Your poem is clear and simple. I liked the first line..."never narrated" is interesting. "Suppressed because we are afraid" - this is so true, in more ways than one, I think.

    Thankyou very much for your entry.


  • anoetic poet
    March 22, 2007
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    A direct and succinct write... Good luck!