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Black magic

Black eyes that mesmerize
Spellbound I gaze forever
Locked out of their secrets
By the forbidding shadows
A mysterious magnetism beckons
The enigma I try to explore
Probe the dark sheltered depths,
Hidden treasures to unravel
Expecting hope, sorrow,
Guilt or just apathy
The delving yields naught
The spirit remains untouched
I surrender to the oblivion
Of the all-consuming nothingness

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  • Lj-
    March 24, 2007
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    This is good. A lot of detail.


    Thank you for entering,
    Best of luck!


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    March 24, 2007
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    Great write!
    Azlyn