do you sometimes leave your friends and sit all alone?
do you sometimes feel the pain from a hidden thorn?
there must be a better thing beyond this flesh and bone,
but what you really lack may never be born!
around the same loop,you`re searching for a new hope,
not knowing that you are hanging your throat
with the same old rope.....
passed this stage of hunger for love,
what remains inside, would it ever be enough?
is it autumn yet or is it spring?
doesn`t make much difference if life remains rough....
keep hiding your heart`s truth
until you pass your years of youth
why don`t you break loose?
it`s your life that you choose!
is sunlight waiting beyond this black night?
would you find one reason to continue your fight?
you are out of time, in the wrong age ,
you are just a blind knight,
sharing a shadow with a deluded mind....
is it really fun to be a mystery?
does it really please you to be one of a kind?
A contest entry
- Invite Only! #2 by AliceinPoetryLand.
1800 points, ended July 21, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Just Me...And You... by FlipperSwitch.
600 points, ended September 8, 2007, 18 entries
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1050 points, ended March 6, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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nice piece
i like the poem but some lines werent as well placed
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well done, i really liked the last line. the rhyme was a little forced, but it still worked out. overall, good poem.
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Very good...and yes; I do like being one of a kind.
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you are really talented
you are really talented well done, i wish i could feel the hope you do and write about hope the way you do, i write about depression and a little love an dthats what feeling goes into it, you must have a lot of hope because the feeling in your poems is so strong. well done!
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