Who knew that one day
I would be Cinderella
washing dishes, doing laundry
all of this?? What for?
So that I can sit here peacefully
and know my house is clean
but all you do when I ask you to
is yell and bitch and scream!!
What you don't understand is
my life ever revolves
around picking up your crusty socks
and dirty underwear.
For once I wish I could snap my fingers
like a modern day Mary Poppins
and never have to look for long
at the pile of clothes in the corner.
Okay, so you have a job..
well so do I you slob!!!
But my job runs on past eight hours
to twenty-four and seven.
You certainly do not make life easy
when I have to wander behind you
cleaning up your sticky spills
and picking up your crumbs.
I swear it is like I have three children
only the kids clean better than you
so take your job and shove it
try doing mine for a few!!!!!!!
In a list
A contest entry
- ~For Women Only~ by Nature Song.
525 points, ended March 25, 2007, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Great write and congrats on the trophy too my dear. Sending some home truths into the ears of your hubby and some chuckles into my day. well done.
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Loved it!!
With some anger and humor u have brought out how we are treated and how we should be!! There is a lot of emotion in the work and hence we can all relate to it!!
Congrats for the bronze!!
preets
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lol i pay this one... they really dont know how muchit really does entail.... fantastic write that you have penned, well done and i wish you luck inyour contest
cheers
Jen -
most definitely an agressive write. however, truly written. :/
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I heave to agree with Troyias, the frustration is here, speaks volumes! Great job, cute pic. Good luck in the contest. ~Sie
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Wow
Great poem here but i feel some frustration and anger built up.. Try working full time and still having the dirty socks to picke up. Great Job. Beautiful write the flow is wonderful and the meaning specific.
*Go with God* my friend,
Valerie
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