It flows
like the tendrils
of turbulence
from the warmth
of stillness.
Author notes
Crimson!!
A contest entry
- In 10 words ~ by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended March 25, 2007, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I'm not sure if I would have gotten this without your author notes, but I must say the descriptions are very lovely. There's simply beautiful images in these 10 words.
Thanks for entering. Enter again if you want.
DancingRed.
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Just 10 words! Really great - thanks for entering!
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excellent
an excellent and masterful way of describing the color crimson ...
outstanding ...
congrats on your silver award !
maa
ps. I love your avatar ...
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Such a creative and thought provoking little piece and as you have added the colour in your author's comments it certainly makes your words stand out.
Thanks for sharing... x
Love and light,
Butterfly.
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