Echoes of lapis lazuli;
tranquility...
...infinite meridian
touching white horses.
Author notes
title is included in the five lines!
A contest entry
- In 10 words ~ by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended March 25, 2007, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The contest asks for 5 line poems. You'll have to changethe poem or it'll be disqualified by day after tomorrow. Candy, Contest Holder
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hmmmmm...is that realy tranquility?!because all I can see are wild,crazy,white horses well...I shall fight for my vision artfuly penned indeed!
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Very creative indeed with such majestic wording.
Thanks for sharing... x
Love and light,
Butterfly.
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A most beautiful 3-liner. Wonderful imagery indeed.
All the best with this
Gaylene
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I don't know what elso to say, other than..I love the way you write!
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Superb description and imagery. The picture is fantastic. Good luck in the contest...Sue
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