candied color,
divine drink
in sensational shades
of the sky.
A contest entry
- In 10 words ~ by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended March 25, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Immensely original. I'd toast to this.
Even in ten words you have to use allieration, don't you? Love ya.
DancingRed.
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Wow. This one is really short. I saw the contest it was in though so I could see why it needed to be. I'm glad you had the picture up thought or I might not have understood the meaning of your words as well. The picture was really beautiful but your poem gave it so much more meaning than I saw in it myself. You did a great job of this.
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Ouuness. I love the imagery--did you get thegold yo?
O btw, even if I love the picture up there, I think it falls flat in front of your words. Man, you are creative.
Good luck yo(too much of yo, it's addictive I tell you )
~Bad Resln -
Quite majestic and truly beautiful.
Thanks for sharing... x
Love and light,
Butterfly.
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the most original 10 word and title i have ever read!!!!!
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Linsay with this picture and these magical words this is just too much.... it's so short and holds so much meaning. Divine drink sensational shades I love the way you changed the fonts and all..... perfect write
great luck to you in the contest !!! betsy
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So short, and so full of life! This really express the sky, and with the picture, great. It truely is beautiful... would not surprise me if it made people looka at the sky with new eyes!
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