Nasty thoughts keep popping in my head
Thinking about you and me in bed
A few ropes here and there will do
A cane, a whip, a few vibes too
Thinking about you and me in bed
Or maybe someone else instead
Playing around with things we like
There’s nothing much that we dislike
A few ropes here and there will do
To tie you down until I’m through
Tease you please you till morning light
Keep you my slave all through the night
A cane, a whip, a few vibes too
Things I could do with these to you
Creating pain and pleasure too
Beg for mercy, before I’m through
Scream through the night, in pure delight
A token fight may ease your plight
You can take me, to this I swear
And from my body clothes you tear
A token fight may ease your plight
And let you take me through the night
Promise to bite and cause me pain
Orgasmic delights you will gain
You can take me, to this I swear
Any way you want, I don’t care
Enjoy my body, treat me mean
Easiest way to keep me keen
And from my body clothes you tear
Do whatever you want if you dare
The things we do for our leisure
Will give us both at last, pleasure
In a list
A contest entry
- 26 letters, 26 enteries Number 2 by SensualWhispers.
600 points, ended April 13, 2007, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very beautiful
I love your poem. it flow nicely, fits the nasty thoughts theme and of course, we all knew you'd go sexual with it. hehehehehehehe You are one of the best sensual sexual writers I know.. You've made the finalist list .. Congrads. thanks for entering the contest and the best of luck to you. Kassie -
A definate BDSM...lol.
Lots of descriptive wording to entice intense images;
Turning this into a mini movie in the mind....
Excellent work, and very enjoyable...
Jeffro -
never thought of you being this submissive--maybe you should visit the Satyr in person
the Satyr
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Oh my....
this is so incredibly hot... and I love the background girl... WOW.... This is intense this early in the morning... .
xoxo
Heidi
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Wow, talk about hot under the collar!!! I think I need a cold shower. nevertheless a very entertaining piece of work, a little cliched in places but who cares when you're having fun. Well done and good luck in the contest. Val
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Pleasured fully.
A bouncy,sensual spin......
Ropes and whips should get him in,
To do the things that do delight
To see the dawn after a "full - on " night.
But lets not forget the torn ,tattered clothes
And glimspes given beneath scanty robes
The joy in which sights delight
In soft luminescence of the night.
Alan.
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Now I see why you chose nasty thoughts you had a hot little write in mind and you did it wonderfully best of luck to you in your contest
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reminds me of a C.S.I episode I watched. This is very seductive and sensual. I love the presentation as well. Where did you get the bg? It's great as well.
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interesting, I like using form poetry for naughtiness. Three bunnies for you!
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This poem is very sexy...It caught my eye at first sentence and I couldn't stop reading it....BEAUTIFUL!!!
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BRAVO Well done. I love it. Wish my man was more like this.
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VERY good Jen! I am really impressed with this one - I am sitting here with a HUGE smile on my face and know exactly what u were getting at here
It's amazing what a little (or a lot, depending on Master's mood) of pain can do to enthrall a slave
This one definitely deserves 3 applause (pity I can't give it more)
WELL DONE!!!!
PS: adore the background - really sexy
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I've never been a BDSM sort of girl. But I do like the way you wrote this, ordering the lines in a roundel. Two, actually. I was pleased.
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a difficult form factor here
double retourne, this writer seems to handle it without difficulty and the retournes read like poetic emphasis very well done, the rhyming is excellent, and the meter is very good, the message of personal expression is very well done with joy and enthusiasm...overall this is excellent...PK
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nasty thoughts indeed....loved how you did this one, Jen. You really did well with the rhyming, which I find to be very hard in erotica but you still made it look easy.
**Ktulu Blackwolfe**
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see now, i need to masterbat, thank you very very much, i just got done too, it was lesbain porn and now i wanna beat it til i hurt it, thank you so much, lol, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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What a brilliant way to use your title! I loved this piece, it is very sexy indeed! Good luck in the contest!
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