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Forgotten dreams

Floating dreams down a ghostly stream,
the love & desire ever so missed,
and quietly floats with willow leaves,
through the clouds of  silvery mist,

and quietly floats away.

With the whispers of the willows,
the shimmer of the moon,
and the trickle of forgotten dreams
that float along the ghostly stream.

Shadows drift along clouded waters,
and sounds of the night draw near,
whispers of hope guide floating dreams,
through the clouds of mist to waters clear,

into the light of moonbeams.

And hope guides them home,
through the darkness of despair,
past the edge of the waters,
so forgotten dreams can be shared.


It is there,

along the streams of dream land,
where our dreams shall live,
long after they're forgotten dreams..

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  • Pollyanna
    December 7, 2007

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    Read like a heart enchanted dream

    Shadows drift along clouded waters,
    and sounds of the night draw near,
    whispers of hope guide floating dreams,
    through the clouds of mist to waters clear,
    into the light of moonbeams.Aye Krissi, what a stunning verse, and these lines here I chose to highlight have charmed me smile, and mused me mind.

    Absolutely beautiful me girl.

    How've yer been?

    Look time no see huh?

    Loves, Pollyanna


  • Nicolette Everett
    November 13, 2007

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    This is a beautiful poem. Very nicely put and I love the flow. It made me feel as if apart of nature, just blowing through quietly.
    Good job!


  • storiesuntold gold member
    October 10, 2007

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    True indeed

    Dreams are never forgotten just some are placed upon the sheves in our minds as old whatnots as a reminders of a time of dreams


  • Florida Sunshine
    May 27, 2007

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    What a terrific write~ I really enjoyed this poem! You did an excellent job! Thanks so much for entering it in my 2nd chance contest!


  • Tamera
    May 2, 2007

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    " And hope guide them home through darkness of despair..." Beautiful line, about holding on until you reach the light and someone to share it with. It's only giving up that robs us of realizing the dream


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    April 9, 2007
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    Very well written, thank you very much for entering. whisper


  • Manoj Sanyal
    March 29, 2007
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    ... DREAMY AND HOPEFUL.
    Best wishes and good luck,


  • Afflicted Affection
    March 22, 2007

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    its funny how dreams and memories can come back to haunt you after so many months or years...i really like this....bravo Much <333


  • drkmisery1
    March 22, 2007

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    very calming poem... makes me feel like im floating down a peaceful river on my back... lying on the top of the water... looking at the wind rushing through the trees and staring at the night sky... with the radiant light of the moon on everything... nice write... good luck in your contest and in your furture writes

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