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Self Contradiction

O Traitorous Echo,
O Curative Villain,
Listen to youself!
You rebel toward that which will only make you
...happy.

"Listen to yourself."

Author notes

The voices in your head...Sometimes you have to listen to them! Just a funny thought! I've been struggling alot lately with myself, and this is kind of a reflection of my inner argument! Just something to think about!

S2
The Queen

ps- This might get changed around a bit...who knows?

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  • Purush
    March 23, 2007
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    inner soul

    some times the inner soul guides us on the right path.
    some times it goesawry and makes all odd proposition.
    As a human with aserene soul we have to take decisions and make them strong
    the verse reflects this theory in words

  • PalmettoSky
    March 23, 2007

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    i agree that we should listen to our inner voices...unless I'm off my medication then it just becomes a jumbled mess of noise! lol...not a good idea. But I love this idea. I believe that more and more people are coming to this school of thought. I know that as a child I can remember hearing my elders say to listen to our inner voice...the thing about that was that it becomes cliche' ...what we aren't always given along with that is a WAY to listen or the knowledge of exactly how...Good luck...peace and light...kp


  • Poetry and I Inc
    March 23, 2007
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    Interesting piece. Makes me wonder...... -theQueen"


  • A Murderous Lament
    March 22, 2007

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    AWesome.

    Great write in such a short amount of lines and words. Really educated words too lol. I had to look two up lol. Good job

    A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33