No one [knows]
how she
b \
l \
e \
e \
d \
s \
at night.
Wishing upon
her decadent bloody scabs.
//.Please kill me tonight.\\
Or how she [hides] those
.P.i.n.s.
In the drawer, [wrapped]
In her old cut up jeans.
//.Can’t let them go.\\
And no one has [found]
Her |r|a|z|o|r|s|
shoved [between] the springs
In her bed
Sleeps over /b/la/d/e/s/
Wears the .p.i.n.s.
//. Its not like anyone ever [cared].\\
No one [sees] her will.
Written in her own
b\
l\
o\
o\
d\
[Tucked] away so nobody can see.
In the crack in the
f l o o r
//.Nobody can see it.\\
Next to the wall.
[Waiting] oh so patiently.
For her to [pick] it up and
[Hold] it in her hand so
Once the |r|a|z|o|r|s| and .p.i.n.s.
Have [made] her
Pale
And .cold.
They can r-e-a-d
In the morning
\|.Sunshine.|/
//.Never forget me.\\
Author notes
option #2:: suicide [[hardcore yupp yupp]]
Who shut off my electricity?
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i lovessss this. I love the way the poem gives you a total "feel" .. like it lots. Good luck in the contest!!!
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for my purpose: 9.5
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I like this piece. Good luck and thanks for entering.
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woah sooo emtional its amaze
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wow
thats so moving
i love it.
the ending is amazing
cookies&&[love]
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umm this was good...I can relate this as a cutter, I do find the structure to make it difficult to read but all in all a very emotionally written piece...keep it up
XTashaX -
sarah i really love this poem...i can definitly see some truth in this...is it 100% true?...either way great poem
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no droid this isnt completely true.
dont worry
i have no will
and...
i dont bleed at night
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