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My Annie

[Annie:] The darkness inside
Eats me alive
These chains
Tie me to you
Without your love
I have no will to survive

[Guy:] Oh my Annie
How could I ever leave you?
Without you I'm dying
I've never felt like this before
I feel your pain everyday
This must be love

[Annie:]I believe in you
Even if you don't believe in yourself
Wasn't that enough?
I'll die for you
Because it's just too painful
To go on without you, love

[Guy:]I see the light in you
But you can't see it Annie
Why can't you see how wonderful you are?
I'll cry for you
Knowing what you'll do
I'm sorry for what I did Annie

[Annie:]My love is immortal
You cannot kill it my dear
Please come back to me
My scars are timeless
Only you can heal them my love
Please come back to me

[Guy:]Don't let our love die Annie
I miss you so much
I can't forget your face
Don't scar your beautiful skin Annie
I can't take anymore guilt
I can't forget your touch

[Annie:]I believe in you my love
I want to help you change your ways
Please don't crush me again
I can't forget the way your love
Filled me with joy
I only feel safe in your arms

[Guy:]I want to be worthy of you
I want to make you proud Annie
I won't hurt you this time
Unlike all those other girls
You love me for who I am
I can't believe I almost lost you, my Annie

[Both:] Stars fall like rain
Catch these dreams
Before they fade
Nothing will keep me
From your side
Forever yours to love

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  • Beating gold member
    April 15, 2007

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    Beautiful

    I love this. It's a beautiful love story. I know the feelings described. How hard it can be to get used to the fact that someone cares / someone loves you. I love the line "My scars are timeless"


  • La Tua Cantante
    April 13, 2007

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    I loved reading this poem. It showed how much you love this girl (I'm assuming). Very well written. My favorite part was:
    "Stars fall like rain
    Catch these dreams
    Before they fade
    Nothing will keep me
    From your side
    Forever yours to love"
    Good luck in my contest.
    -La Tua.