Outside the expanse of my mind
Farther than world’s end
Lies the intangible conception
Forever
Untouched by human hearts
Unreached by the flow of time
Clocks hands cannot count it
Timeless
Living on in spite of death
Existing, undamaged by life
Continuing regardless of time
Undying
Unchanged despite changes
Enduring through unceasing movement
Faithful in the face of living
Infinite
Endless, in a world of beginnings
Misunderstood in its eternal fate
Everlasting no matter its mistaken identity
Evermore
A contest entry
- Three Options by Autumns Soul.
525 points, ended April 22, 2007, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love how you had the stanza then the one word after that. I really love it and speaks truth. My favoright line is
"Misunderstood in its eternal fate
Everlasting no matter its mistaken identity"
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thanks so much
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Beautiful job. I liked the way you had the single words in ther. It brought a different focus to it!
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I liked this...I don't know why but the single words stood out more and I'm not sure if they made it choppy or defined...Thank you for entering and goodluck in my contest.
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