A color of depression,
Anger and
Sadness to some.
But to me,
To me it is healing
Helpful and
Beautiful.
Helps through the sadness
and the pain.
It does not shine nor glow.
But to me,
It is beautiful in every way.
Author notes
Honest feedback and any grammar mistakes.
Other than that...go for it.
A contest entry
- Why do you love the color Black? by Lj-.
350 points, ended March 24, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very nicely done. I like the honesty to it.
Thank you for your entry,
Good luck!
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no grammer mistakes that i saw. its helps to describe the color black alot.its a nice small poem. i like it. good luck in the contest
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truly unique and deep felt truth.
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A very unique view on the colour black. Very well written. Just wondering why it is you feel the colour is healing. (I'm just curious that's all) Different colours represent different things to different people. I like the creative spin you put on this and the title. Wishing you the best of luck in the contest.
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Not really sure... Most people think it is bad and I, being defiant as always, found it peacful and calming and to me that is healing as I am stressed often.
Thank you for the comment and curiosity may have killed the cat but it can't kill me(or you)
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