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Divine Waters (Free Verse)

"Narnia, Narnia, Narnia, awake!  Be walking trees!  Be talking beasts!  Be divine waters!"
          Aslan in The Magician's Nephew

My hands brush the pages
And echoes of magic
caress my fingertips

Before my eyes
Lie swards of green
And divine waters
Sheltered between parchment

And around me the real world
Seems like an old TV screen
Black and white and fuzzy

My heart beats a cadence
Against my ribs at the thought
To walk the green pastures
By the lion

The Lantern Waste
awaits my coming
And fair Cair Paravel
calls me to my home by the sea

I am a wanderer here
A mere vagabond
My real home lies
Between the pages

This world of ink draws breath
And it has become my Heaven

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  • ronnica
    March 29, 2007

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    Faith can sometimes have substitutes and so help us to cling and if it helps us hold on to the reality of Christanity then I am in favour of it , especially something as inspiring as the cronicles,well done


  • Errant Panther gold member
    March 25, 2007

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    Interesting merger between fantasy and faith. Whilst not a fan of the chronicles, this write still held some intrigue for me, so for that at least, bravo.


  • travis34dietC
    March 23, 2007

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    i know how you feel! i love the Chronicles of Narnia to sometimes i feel like i belong there more than i do here. very nicely written! great job!