Hold me
And tell me everything will be alright
Just like you did
In my dream last night
So I don’t break
Kiss me nice
And warm my heart
Before it turns to ice
And when the day breaks
You wake from dreaming
Know that I think of you
With love my heart’s teeming
Take my hand
And show me that place
Where you and I would love
Where we’d finally find grace
Author notes
Enjoy! -WriteOrWrong597
A contest entry
- For Oboebaybee's faves only! by in-the-twilight.
600 points, ended April 1, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I Want An AP Sister by LoveLikePoetry.
340 points, ended April 20, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is good. the rhyming is amazing, but it takes you a while to get into. thanx for entering in my contest and good luck
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its good.
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I like this too.
I often have dreams and well this sounds like one for you. I liked how you phrased this. It is a keeper and keep on penning them. -
If only what we write responds back to what we wrote.
We probably wouldn't be writing about love anymore
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kewl
i like it. keep on writing!
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Beautiful!
great poem! I absolutely love it!
Jenn
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wow
this is good. i really like it. the rhyming was nice too. good luck, keep it up! Rose.
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all beautiful ,keep up the good work
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aww. this is sooo um . .. well i dont know the word.
wow. it was great(not the word but i have to use something)
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This is beautiful for sure girl! I love it a lot! I appreciate you taking to time to write this great write for my contest! Rock on! xoxo Meg
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Thank you so much!
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