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Nasty

Caught with my panties down drowning my fingers in the erotic thoughts of you
further poisoning myself with the need for the fantasies to be true
hypnotized into a seductive trance by the explicit vision
sight emerging from within the depths of my imagination
hands tracing the mysterious being no longer hidden from my reality
captivated by the naked presence standing there before me
as clothes continue to rain into a gentle puddle at my feet
shining in front of you spotlight exposing the juices my body will secrete
feeling you touching the rich caramel texture of its smoothness
fingers unraveling the essence with each strokes genuine caress
anticipation getting higher and higher as you begin teasing me down low
with light flickers moving about in a circular motion slow
your tongue submerging itself deeper covered by the pure wetness

sitting over your face rubbing your bone hand gliding along the length of this hardness

taking you into my mouth lips massaging the sensitivity

in unison to every lick found buried within my center sucking you intensely

tasting each inch further tempted by the warmth of the sensual

as pleasure immerses itself in this explosive chemistry of the sexual

pushing yourself into me grinding between my thighs

pulsating rhythm escalating from the temperatures constant rise

room getting hot and sultry spinning from inhales of the overwhelming heat

bodies fluidly flowing conjoined in an unanimous beat

connected by this desire working up a sweat forming the separation

exhaled breaths quicken with the chanting of an unknown proclamation

loudly screaming your name to the heavens barely holding it in

confessions of the enticing injections with the worship of this sin

body language communicating the climax of the  forbidden

as harmonious sound expresses the bittersweet intimacy

feening for the continuation of the present selfishly

grasping on to someone not belonging to me

 

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  • maralisa silver member
    July 31, 2008

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    wow this is hot and vividly erotic full of powerful emotions and deep imagery good luck in the contest


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    October 10, 2007

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    Whoooeeee, I asked for erotic, and I GOT IT!. Tis was a total turn on of a read. Thank you and Good Luck


  • Emerald Dreams
    June 13, 2007

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    Very nicely done, it was like the read got to watch this transpire. Thankd for entering and good luck.

    Emerald Fire


  • cali951
    May 17, 2007
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    I want to say thanks for everyone that entered my contest it was very hard to judge this contest because the poems were all good and i loved reading them.I had a blast reading them good job and to the people who didnt win you all did a great job.


  • cali951
    May 16, 2007

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    I like this poem especially the way you use the words so detailed its like im watching it good job on this piece of work. its really good


  • johnny nobody
    May 16, 2007

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    a bit dragged out and dense - you would need to read and read and read and read and read and read and the you'd be too tired to go for the big O.


  • darell
    March 22, 2007

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    Oh Yeah!!

    This was intensely sensual and sexy.
    You nasty nasty girl! WOW! You sure know
    how to express erotic fantasies very well.
    The intimate detail of your minds imagination
    is awesome. I was with you every delicious step
    of the way. You seem to be very passionate aswell
    as romntic. Love is something that should be done
    slowly. I believe you did a great job.
    You're starting out brilliantly!
    Can't wait to read more from you.
    Let yourself go and be free.
    The best of you will come that way


  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    March 22, 2007

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    This is a sensual write that leaves little to the imagination, yet is done without the usual wording that would have it being a write like everyone elses. The only suggestion for change that I would make would be to reduce the occasions of using words ending in ing. It can be a bit distracting to the readers eye and generally by using a different tense of the word, you can strenghten the meaning a bit.

    Overall, though, well done

    Keep writing and again, welcome to the site.

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