((both))
I'm waiting for you
to be forever mine.
Just talk to me,
[talk to me]
I'll be yours, too.
((girl))
I wait for him,
everyday.
I keep on breathin',
keep on livin',
hoping he will come to me.
Every heartbeat hurts
when it's not me he's with.
((girls chorus))
I watch him,
seein' every move he makes,
waiting for him to make his move.
He doesn't know
how much I
Cry,
think,
dream
about him.
He's the one I want,
I can't live without him.
((guy))
She's on my mind
and in my dreams.
I'll never leave her
while she's with me.
Hoping she will come to me,
I'm wishing I was him.
((guy chorus))
I see her,
I watch every graceful step,
wanting to have her in my arms.
She doesn't know
how much I
Dream,
care,
think
about her.
She is the one I want,
I can't live without her.
((both))
My life's a living hell
Without you by my side.
I need you to survive,
you're causing pain that i can't hide.
I buried it deep inside,
and you brought it out again.
The pain, it lasts forever,
but only makes me love you more.
((girl))
You don't know how long it's been
Since I have felt this way.
I need you here to make me feel
the way I have today.
((guy))
I do love you, I can't leave.
It'd tear my heart apart,
To see your pain when I depart.
It'll never happen.
((both))
I see you starin' at me,
Just come and talk to me please.
I need you to know what I feel.
So, baby, here's the deal,
Just give me one chance,
That's all I ask.
I'll prove to you I mean it,
I love you to the end.
I'll do the best I can,
even if it kills me.
((both chorus))
-girl-
I want you,
I love you.
-guy-
I need you,
Comin' for you
-girl-
Save me from the darkness,
Take me to the light.
-guy-
Be my Cinderella,
I'll be your shining knight.
-both-
I will be yours forever,
You'll always be my only love.
We could've been together sooner,
I was afraid of broken love.
Now I kno that I was wrong,
Such pointless fears love can spread.
Author notes
Broken and defeated
written 2/23/07
This was written for our band, and i have the stage directions for it with the original. cant wait til we get our lead player! (fingers crossed Sierra!)
A contest entry
- For Oboebaybee's faves only! by in-the-twilight.
600 points, ended April 1, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This will work.
Ilike music and sing in a country group on Monday nights for Senior citizens. I like the wording in this song and I do hope you record it. -
Amazing! It's beautiful! Such an amazing duet. I could hear music with it, though I'm not sure if it's what you envisioned. Anyways really beautiful!
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Thanks!
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wee heee this is tru and it's killin me inside cause when i fread it., it reminds me of u kno who and it's not JR.
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is it Mr i'll-fight-my-best-friend-for-her-but-i-shouldnt?
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it's jason. so yea but mitzi isn't my bestfriend you are.
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I liked the whole thing, but the end and the girl's first verse and chorus were my favorite parts.
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thanks, i hope the way i put whos part it was at the end wasn't too onfusing tho...
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This is an awesome song... bet it sounds absolutely beyond amazing with music with it! Thanks for enteirng! Rock on! xoxo Meg
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