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Bright are the shades of blackness
Lightlessness destroys all deadly shadows
Always in a soundless void
Can you just feel the peace
Keep within the shades of blackness

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  • Lj-
    March 24, 2007

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    This is simple but says a lot. A slight mysteriousness to it.

    Thank you for your entry,
    Good luck!


  • kathy1967
    March 21, 2007

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    SPECTACULAR!!

    This is so SPECTACULAR!! I love every single line
    in this piece of writting so vivid with the imagery
    just simply SPECTACULAR!!