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P lease, please, help me do

A ll I need are points from you

T o help me in my final quest

T o just become one of the best

Y ou’ll never know how much it means

A s I get published in magazines

N ew though I maybe to writing verse

N ow you’ve seen me at my worst

4 God sake help me to advance

5 years from now, I’ll take the chance

0 h, dear Patty, hear my plea

0 h, I beg, give them to me

 

 

 

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  • x Bright Eyes x
    March 27, 2007

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    i really like this and how you used the contest judges name also the flow was great and it was a very good read


  • Inside and out
    March 25, 2007

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    Very well done! Your acrostic is well done. The fact that it included numbers and flowed easily is brilliant. Well done dear poet. Good luck in the contest.


    • Sue Cardwell gold member
      March 25, 2007
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      Many thanks for you comment and applause. I didn't make the winners this time round, maybe next....Sue


  • MargaretG
    March 22, 2007

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    This is a joy - you have a great sense of humour and beg so humbly. Everyone needs time, practice and a few hundred points to become a better poet. Well done.

    • Sue Cardwell gold member
      March 22, 2007
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      Many thanks for commenting and applauding my poem. glad you liked it....Sue


  • Vashman
    March 22, 2007
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    ha-ha fantastic!!!
    I loved it!
    it made me smile on this weary day at work!


    • Sue Cardwell gold member
      March 22, 2007
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      Thanks for commenting and applauding. I'm glad I could help cheer your day...Sue


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    March 21, 2007
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    this contest has inspired some of the cutest writes i have ever seen here on all poetry. from angels, to stick ups, to peanut butter and jelly. i wish you the best of luck in this contest i have entered. viyanna rosemarie

    • Sue Cardwell gold member
      March 22, 2007
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      Many thanks for you best wishes and applause, good luck to you as well...Sue


  • pattyann4500
    March 21, 2007

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    Oh! MY! God! This is just too cute!!!! I must admit that I don't think anyone has ever used my name in an acrostic so well and without anything to do with how I am so much one of their favorites. LOL This is unique and quite refreshing.

    I do absolutely love this, and you have made your case appealing. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest. Hugs, Patricia


  • NooNiThEWitcH
    March 21, 2007
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    Nice, now that is begging!
    Are you sure you were not on your knees when you wrote this?
    Very nice and I like the Acrostic touch along with the rhyme.

    Keep on writing and good luck in the contest, and good luck to me too, coz those are a LOT of points hehehe
    Nooni

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