Perplexed transgression
from one-sided angles
and, trepidations saw
the gravitational concrete
tumbled
Vibrant hues border veils
of submergence; glorified
unions acknowledged this
unfamiliarized metaphor
Dawn sets while broken
lamps hazily flicker
towards insinuated life
blinking with eyes closed
yet, regeneration has been
now twice removed
Granite tiles now lie
in an awakening state
for marble wasn't deemed
stablized
Half opened doors
swung tirelessly
beneath windy gales
searching to be
rediscovered
Author notes
From an abstract point of view, this talks about how man was born, taised, then died only to be reincarnated into something new
B Chandler
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- Age by flight.
900 points, ended April 1, 2007, 23 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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This really brought a calm that I needed right now,
this is a very sturdy piece.
Beautiful metaphors.
I loved this: Dawn sets...
very opposite words tied in together by time.
peace to all ~flight -
this is cool you did a great job on this, like always, you have a skilled pen, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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I like it. I lean a little more towards shorter poems, and feel this might have been abit stronger with less lines, but I really did like it!
Good luck to you in this contest.
(your supposed to put your username in the AC, FYI. Don't want you to get eliminated.)
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