Well, I want your points
and here are my simple reasons:
I want your points coz I like having more and more
I have greed, gluttony and lust
when it comes to points!
I envy those who hold contests
for losts of points.
I like to comment every now and then
but now I am simply lazy and that is sloth.
I have to write you a poem to getyour points,
I'm angry, I want those points!
So, you see for starters
I have all Seven Deadly Sins
and All of them of YOUR points!
So, give me Your Points!
Or I'll sneeze in your face
and infect you with my cold
or whatever it is I got!
Yes, I'm sick and I want those points!
If you want me to jump around the house
I'll do it, but I won't run naked!
If you want me to kiss you or hug you,
I'll do that too!
If you want me to cry.. well I'll try
If you want to live to see tomorrow then...
GIVE ME THOSE POINTS!!
By: Nada Adel Sobhi
Author notes
I was going to stick to the 7 deadly sins.. but i didn't.. so I hope I didn't ruin it by the rest
And yes I'm sick so don't come anywhere near me! (for ur own good of course)
A contest entry
- Tell me why you need my points! by pattyann4500.
5250 points, ended March 22, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Tee Hee Hee!! Again with the funniness (if that's a word ). It was a really good idea to use the seven deadly sins. I really like your poems, when you do this kina thing, when you are telling the contest person why you want the points, it always cracks me up! And when you talked about your cold and said that you would sneeze on them, that made me laugh harder.
Keep Writing
~~Meri~~
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ok nada ur truly sick i cant believe h greedy u r u could have just asked nicely 4 d points u know lol this was funny to read thk u 4 sharing and miss u girl where d hell r u ??
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well, you certainly covered all of the bases with this write. i wish you the best of luck in the contest we both have entered. viyanna rosemarie
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It sounds to me as if you could be dangerous! I laughed all the way through reading this, and I have to say that I really enjoyed it.
I hate the idea of being the one who paves your way right straight to hell, but I have a feeling I just may have to. I just really loved this!!
Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest. Hugs, Patricia
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And you said I was grovelling. lol
Don't you dare sneeze, cough or do anything bodily over any of us. Thank you
Good luck, I think we both need it.....Sue
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