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But I Won't Move

I glance at that mountain view

that casts the shadow on your resting place

Oh the love of it that dwelt in your being

The wind blew and dried my tears

Tears that were cried only a few years before

My weight against the Earth gives me a sinking sensation

but I won't move...

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Inspired by thoughts I had standing over my step-mothers grave...

KAY

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  • Pusher
    September 2, 2007

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    Great!

    Nice piece of work, quite epic, it has a certain timeless quality that I like, it is as though this could of been written before the Earth was covered in buildings and the machinations of man.

  • ecrivain01 silver member
    April 18, 2007
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    Yep. You nailed it.

    Great job. Nothing else need be said.


  • Bryan-CarnelianHope
    March 21, 2007

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    :O :(

    Oh my god thats so beautiful. I can never stand over graves, I don't think I'm strong enough as a person to remember things like that - even if they weren't mine to remember.
    This is a sticker-write. Excellent.

  • Puppydog gold member
    March 21, 2007

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    BEAUTIFUL!

    Nature is able to helps us to be in touch with our inner selves and our hearts. A touching and tender poem.