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Missing Sister

I come from a family where i am the only girl,
I have 5 brothers and a missing sister.

I know you are out there somewhere.
If only i could find you.

It would be a dream come true to have a little sister.
Someone i can dress up, spoil rotten, take shopping.

Can't really do that with brothers,
Can't have girly talks.
Do each others hair.

All my life i have wanted a sister.
If i can not have a sister of my own.

Could i have you as a sister?

Can we have girly talks?

Swap stories, have a laugh and a joke.

Boys are such a bore.
All they do is play football and play the computer

By the way my name is Rachel, im 19, i work in a nursery and
studying childcare at college.

Also i would would love to have a sister like you!

xx

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  • EmeraldDreams
    March 21, 2007

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    A lovely piece! I am an only child and I always wanted a sister! I bet me you and Beth would have a great time together! Thankyou so much for the wonderful entry. xx


    • Xxdeepdarkcradlexx
      March 28, 2007
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      im glad you liked it, im sure we would have a brill time. ive got a 18 month old brother and when my mom was pregnant i was begging for a girl, but no luck. i must be special lol! thanks for the comment, good luck on the judging! x x x x


  • Ambiguous
    March 21, 2007
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    very nice but...

    do u really want a sister? i have two, i would rethink that if i were you. lol but good.


    • Xxdeepdarkcradlexx
      March 28, 2007
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      well it would probably be better than 5 brothers, ah well, it would be nice to have one though. thanks for the comment x x