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You Knew That This Would [Kill me]

There's *posion* in my veins
    & ashes on the floor
  My ♥ is b/e/a/t/i/n/g fast
{[|What the fuck happened last night?|]}

I can't even look at -myself-
  in the mirror without
wanting to >>puke<<

There's scars all over my |face|
  & I remember -you- E(ejack-u-lated)
        on my :stomach:

Your such a {fucking maniac}
  but I guess I am too for
      letting


you do this


I'm just a *pretty* Lil {fuck.up}
  & last night was just a

.
.
.
.
♥


[one.night.stand.]
 

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  • noir eyes
    March 24, 2007

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    I'm just a *pretty* Lil {fuck.up}
    & last night was just a

    .
    .
    .
    .
    ♥


    [one.night.stand.]


    loved the ending, babe
    short & sweet =]


  • Dead Star--x
    March 24, 2007

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    no i like it ♥ its good!!!
    i hate those mornings when you wake up & your like what the fuck happend then it hits you & you are like im so screwed up then it doesnt matter..
    x-amount of words


  • Shantalina
    March 22, 2007

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    AHH!! I love it baby!

    I'm just a *pretty* Lil {fuck.up}
    & last night was just a

    .
    .
    .
    .
    ♥

    [one.night.stand.]


    Fucking fabulous love, best of luck in the contest!


  • Mildew in PinK tile
    March 21, 2007

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    well hun i don't think its bad at all, there were some great parts & the opening stanza was great!

    "I can't even look at -myself-
    in the mirror without
    wanting to >>puke<<

    There's scars all over my |face|
    & I remember -you- E(ejack-u-lated)
    on my :stomach:"


    && i love how short it is!!


  • love tank x
    March 21, 2007

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    "There's *posion* in my veins
    & ashes on the floor
    My ♥ is b/e/a/t/i/n/g fast
    {[|What the fuck happened last night?|]}"

    Wow, I really like this one...you portray emotions really well. It gives the reader an anxious/confused/angry/manic feeling, haha. Well whatever I'm trying to say, it's good! Lol ♥

    Jade


  • InfiniteCaitlin
    March 21, 2007

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    OMG BB I LOVE IT!!!!

    AND YOU USED ONE OF MY WORDS!!!!


    I LOVE YOU SO MUCH DOLL FACE!!!!


    THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!



    LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!


    I cant express how much I love it doll


    • DarlingUnwrapMexx
      March 21, 2007
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      aw thank you babe
      && ily too. i couldn't help
      but not use at least one
      of your words =]
      ♥

  • She Stole My Voice
    March 21, 2007

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    It doesn't suck!
    I love you and it
    Love love lovelovelove
    ♥

    ~Princess of Shadows~


  • blemished irises
    March 21, 2007

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    I love this.
    mmhmm.
    thanks for pointing it out =]
    "wanting to >>puke<<

    There's scars all over my |face|
    & I remember -you- E(ejack-u-lated)
    on my :stomach:"


    lovelyyy


  • PaperChainHearts
    March 21, 2007

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    Doll this is AMAZE

    There's scars all over my |face|
    & I remember -you- E(ejack-u-lated)
    on my :stomach:

    ♥ it

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