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why is the world dark

Why is the world so dark
my heart is dark the world is nothing
why do we live why not die
my world is dark and nobody can
change it is wyou world dark is there
nothing to live for

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  • KillerRain
    January 19, 2008

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    confusing

    you were doing real good at first but i think your hands got too fast at the end. Good that you wrote a poem though. keep on writing too, cause i can feel the meaning behind it. I'd like to hear more. KillerRain (A.K.A mom).

  • DarkSpiritDemon
    March 21, 2007
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    whould be great