I sit here,patiently waiting.
Wishing you number would appear.
The phone finally rings, But you don't tell me what i want to hear.
You tell me that you love me, but this isn't working out
I start to cry a little, and then i start to doubt,
All the things I've been feeling since that one special night
then i dreamt you said you loved me and everything seemed alright.
But now here we are, its been 2 years and i'm still not over you,
I try to think of something to help, but nothing will do.
Then one day you approach me, and then you start to talk,
but i can't hold back my tear so i turn around and walk.
You don't understand me, my breath is taken when you look into my eyes,
and when you'll ask me how i've been, just know that i'll lie,
"Just fine, never better!! don't worry about me!"
Then i'll put on a fake smile but know that you see,
Right through the lie and the fake grin,
But still you'll walk away and my whole world will end.
My island of hope in a sea of devastation,
you're gone, i cry, at my stupid fabrication.
I should tell you how i feel but i'm too week,
That i wish we would've stayed together,
and without you my world is lonely and bleak.
Author notes
so... This is ancient.. I really cared about this guy but he just stomped all over my feelings...
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hey, that was a really good poem, and i liked it. the only thing is that you spelled weak wrong on line 20. it's not week. if this poem is true, i hope things turn out well for you. and you must know, if things don't turn out well, it will be time to move on. when someone is over you, it is time to get over it and find another person who feels for you the way you feel for them.
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lol I wrote this a year ago so yeah, i'm mostly over him.. it still kinda sucks seeing him and remembering how he played with my emotions like they were a toy, and it's hard not to break his nose every time i see his face...
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