I love the feeling it brings
So free and untouched
So real and unmarred
Nothing can hide with in it
Only strong ones can embrace it
It holds truth, love, and hate
It is both life and death
For so long I have lived in this world
My heart, mind, and soul have all turned
Black, as the blackest Crow.
It is a world where I live
A world I welcome you too
Do not be afraid
Do not cry
Here you will not be judged
Here you can be yourself
Breath it
Live it
Love it
Welcome it
Blackness
A contest entry
- Why do you love the color Black? by Lj-.
350 points, ended March 24, 2007, 12 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I like this. It feels very realistic.
In line fifteen,
I think you mean 'not,' where you have 'no'
Thank you for entering,
Best of luck!
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