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Vivacity (hay[na]ku)

vivacity
reflects in
effervescent energetic actions

A contest entry

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  • cherche -d -ame
    March 22, 2007

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    thank you for this entry. Effervescence and vivacity even reflect in these words of yours. Best wishes in the contest,
    reenie


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    March 21, 2007
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    I thought haikus had a 5, 7, 5 count. Unless I am off, 4, 3, 8 count. It is a nice poem though.