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Willowleaf

Willow branches bend and sway-
In harmony they dance with ease.
Lilting tunes play through the leaves
Like nothing else I've heard today.
One leaf leaps off to join the world
With flawless wings she flies away-
Life beckons her to romp, to play.
Eventually she'll land, unfurled
And quiet on the sodden ground-
Fullfilled with joy and life and sound.

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supposed to be an analogy to my inner life...

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  • Touchof1der silver member
    March 22, 2007
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    You did a beautiful job with this! It's so nice to meet you willowleaf. I love the comparisions here. Thank you for taking the time and effort to enter my contest. Good luck!
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • Tirrell
    March 21, 2007
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    Beautiful lines.


  • PedroBasiliali
    March 21, 2007

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    Nice

    i am not really much into nature but this made me feel as if i was a leaf ready to play keep up the good work