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Stolen {Identity}

Lights flashing, minding spinning.
Feel on top, like im winning!
Keep on talking, cannot stop.
Mind exploding, i'm going to pop!

Wont be unhappy, Can't be sad.
I can assure you it's not a fad.
Change my name, change my style.
Must keep in character for a while.

Can't let them find the real me,
get rid of her, they cannot see
She was pathetic, stupid and weak
but now ive stopped her, she can not speak.

You see me now, you see me here.
My new found character, please don't fear.
Give me time, i'll make you proud.
Do not worry, for iv'e made her loud.

She is so different and unique
Iv'e given her confidence to ALWAYS speak.
Confident, Outgoing and carefree
She comes up trumphs...compared to me.

Please tell me what you think

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  • joy-division
    March 21, 2007

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    A character must have a "creator." This "creator" is obviously creative, strong, in control & unique. We all have the power to reinvent ourselves at any time. But please don't misplace your own "character card?" - I'd miss you. You write from your heart and just not any old shite. Well done!!! I love your writing & you xxx


    • MissBananza
      March 23, 2007
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      thanks huni, really means alot, i'd miss yoo to hun, thank you for the amazing comment, i love ur writing as well, ur super talented, so dnt give up! :D