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stain glass windows

through the stain glass window
is my life
all the fears i hide behind
under the scars
is the knife
jagged and bloodstained
full of strife
through my eyes
are the tears that I've cried
sorrow and pain
that lyes within my heart
within the broken mirror
is me
and all the things that I used to be

A contest entry

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    April 4, 2007

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    Thank you for entering

    There's so much more that could be said in this.. but you said enough to show me what you suffered. I think you've shown others too

    Thanks for entering


  • Dark Whispers
    March 21, 2007
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    I applaude this poem.I really like it.
    please do the same