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[ When you feel down ]

When you feel down
Instead of a frown,
Go wear a smile
And after a while
Your smile will cheer up the town.

Go watch a movie or read a good book
Go think of something nice to cook.
Life isn't so bad
Don’t let it make you sad
Be bubbly, like a stream or a brook

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  • Naridill
    March 21, 2007

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    This is really cute. I like the shortness of it and the rythme (I cant spell that word, lol). I love it because its really simple! But it still gets a strong message accross.


  • elemental angel
    March 21, 2007

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    Thank you so much for this caring positive inspiring little write, I know what you are saying. Thank you for entering and good luck in my contest
    Bravo