I remember that day,
when we stood out in the pouring rain.
You took my hand,
and we ran and we ran,
until we reached the end of the road.
You touched my face,
sweetly and softly,
caressing my hair,
with your gentle touch.
Closer and closer,
until your lips touched mine.
I was shocked and stunned,
but after a second I smiled at you.
We started out once again together,
but this time it would be for forever.
Author notes
This is a dream I had once so I sort of condensed it into a poem.
A contest entry
- My First Contest!!!!!!!!! by Lady Inferno.
600 points, ended April 19, 2007, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best of the Best by Sapphire Rose.
600 points, ended May 21, 2007, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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WOOOO!!!
I see why you won, that was astounding!!!!
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I need more dreams like that, none of the fragments of nothingness that I get. (That includes the football/pregnant one.) Rather lovey-dovey, but cute nonetheless. Nice job, I'd say.
Sweetest of dreams! ~D -
i would like to congratulate you on the gold trophy you have earned in this contest. viyanna rosemarie
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