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Betrayal 2

go ahead and talk about me
i don't really give a shit
tell everyone my secrets
cuz now you're just another bitch

you think you're something special
you think they'll like you more
but what happens when you run out of info
and they push you out the door

i can't wait till that day comes
i'm gonna laugh right in your face
cuz you'll really have NO friends then
no one to be with you in this place

no, i'm not gonna talk about you
i really couldn't care less
i won't stoop to your low level
this truth i must confess

maybe that's what you want
i don't know, nor do i care
cuz you're nothing to me now
over this, i won't despair

tell people lies about me
tell everyone secrets that i trusted with you
tell everyone i sleep around
i don't give a shit what you do

cuz to tell ya the truth
i'm glad you're gone
it's what i've wanted
all along

so go ahead and talk about me
you'll soon have no "friends" at all
then the ones who used to think we could trust you
can laugh at you when you fall

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  • okami
    March 23, 2007
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    aaahhh... i know who you are talking about, and frankly, a good way to put it. ^.^ and frankly if she is doing that, she isn't at all honorable in anyones eyes. she will fall just like the rest *evil smile*


  • Marilyn.
    March 23, 2007
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    PASSION, PASSION, PASSION!!!! I love it!!!!!


  • bookbandit
    March 22, 2007

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    wow car. u must really be for cereal about his. watever, it's good that u don't want to gossip, gossip is the root of ALMOST all evil in my opinion. lol hope u no u can still talk to me girlie. ttyl!


  • manty
    March 22, 2007
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    I like the truth in this poem, and that it rhymes but still sounds right!

    It's always a shame when you learn that someone isn't what you thought they were. The way I see it though, is atleast you have seen their true colours now rather than later. Keep up the great writing