My heart cries for him as he takes another hit
When Lord will he get over this?
He is throwing his life and soul away another day
wasted another in shame
I have put up with the abuse for quite sometime
I have shed enough tears for a lifetime
I pray for him every single day for him to stop
behaving this way
The drug induced rages are putting a wedge between us
every day
I hold on to the promise that God has for us standing
on his every word
I greet each day with caution and care for my prayers
to be answered
A contest entry
- Drug Abuse by Page Shut down.
800 points, ended April 2, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - How you feel about drugs by 6-Ft-UnDeR.
300 points, ended May 17, 2007, 21 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i love this..i love the rhyme scheme...amazing poem..im glad u entered my contest.
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Thank you for your entry
God is a good one to hold onto in times such as these. The devil tempts so slyly that you have to hold onto God to keep you safe. If this is a true situation I pray that God will help you through.
Good luck and and thanks for entering.
God Bless
Tammy -
Your message is a good expression of a well written free verse poem. It's a powerful little piece in it's own way. This sounded very real like a plea to a love one.Nice write.
~Snappy~
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