1.) Pink Palace
2.) Pink’s Palace
3.) Pastel Pink Palace
4.) Sharazade’s Rose Tones
5.) Pastel Pink Pumpernickle
A contest entry
- Help me finish the project that's in my head. by bird at rose.
450 points, ended April 25, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Please, "Pink Palace" and "Pink's Palace" were already taken up.
Oh so soft and slinky "Pastel Pink Palace" is. It's like lighting a slow beeswax candle, it gives little glare and warmth, but not to it's fullest. And, so, she's offering her perspective on eating through taste in a gentle way. Another cute meaning I found is mainly, the light amount of weight people gain from Pink's is what they need to maintain not being skinny or chubby. Criteria is rhythmic in this name.
In number four, I like the ending two words because she's essaying in either a high or low mode, whichever is proper for the moment aiming to be kind. Nevertheless, I see "Sharazade's" as misspelled and I esteem calling her the queen of all foods per se doesn't fit her slow, nice action in "Rose Tones."
Well, "Pastel Pink Pumpernickle" is pretty, small amounts of bread although there's a typo! However, it is even more powerful if you do me a favor and space "Pumper" and "Nickel" out to freshen the concept out for me because she's not looking for money only, but she's gathering nickels 'cause many are interested in her natural, cheap food as well as low-cooked bakery involved..... Criteria was bouncy.
Thank you for taking the time to join my contest! Rule #4 needs to be applied now but isn't hard at all.
10:42 looking at ginger strings and it's like playing the harp with joy for this,
~ Daisy -
Wow-
Now those are some Creative titles
I imagine the Hostess will smile
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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