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Sound of Spring

I hear the sound of rain,
A sound of tranquility
I hear all the sounds of spring,
As they're tuned in with nature,
Sounds of birds
Sounds of squirels
The nonchalant beavers
Splashing in the waters
The happy hedgehogs,
Communicating with with each other
The wind,
As it whisltes by the trees
The grasshoppers chirps...
The songs of life, in between the flowers
I hear the songs of the birds
As they sing melodiously
I hear the music,
The sounds of spring in full bloom
Celebrating life.

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  • Touchof1der silver member
    March 29, 2007

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    I think you have painted spring's portrait quite well. The sights, the sounds, the smells... they are all so tantalizing. Thank you for taking the time and effort to enter my contest. Good luck!
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • paperwings
    March 24, 2007
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    yay happy poem