You’re dead to me
You don’t even exist.
If I talk more shit
What you gonna do?
Hit me in the face with your fist?
I ain’t the one to be playing these little games
Nigga, you must be insane!
Let me give you some facts
Lay off the crack
You don’t know how you act.
I’m your family
I was a part of your life,
But now you lost me
You should have thought of that before the fight.
I don’t want nothing to do with you.
Trust and believe I’m through.
And you!
No, not you because I’m through with you for life,
But you over there.
It was you that helped gave me life.
And you’re going to allow him to put his hands on me.
I rather be out there living on the streets.
You ain’t nothing but a bluff
You won’t hit me because you ain’t tough
Hit me and you can say good-bye to us
Because I would have you sitting in jail for life.
Trust and believe I ain’t afraid to fight.
But yeah right!
I forgot to tell you something that you should already know
You hit like a bitch!
And look no bruises showed.
You old ass nigga ain’t got nothing on me
Next time I’m going to beat your ass
Trust and believe.
And I can’t stop now
I got one more to go.
Next time you want to put your hands on me
Show me what you got ho
I can’t believe this, yo
Y’all bitches don’t have my back.
What the hell you marry into this family for?
All of us is whack.
This comes from the heart
I ain’t playing no more games
If you want some of this
You better know the rules to get to my fame.
You’re all dead to me
You, her, and him
Y’all can kiss my ass
I’m through!
A contest entry
- Free verse or rhyme ... TOTAL 450 POINTS by Manoj Sanyal.
450 points, ended March 30, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - HATE by lesbian-in-love.
565 points, ended November 5, 2007, 47 entries
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That indeed deserves a round of applause. Very powerful and moving piece. Thanks for entering into the contest and good luck.
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Emotional outbursts with angst...
Best wishes and good luck
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WOW and double WOW!!
YOU GO GIRL!! Kick some ASS and take some names!!
I love it I wish I could tell people that!! What
a SPECTACULAR!! Job with this piece of writting!!
when it comes to the ones we care or have cared
about it always seems to make us madder. You did
a EXCELLENT job!! Thank You!!
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Sems very personal, I know penning poetry helps me get drama out the way for me too sometimes, so more power to ya, and may you keep that sick flow line for line, thanks for sharing you and your rhyme, much love and respect!
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Whoah! So, you're not going to be living there anymore? I mean, that just messes up my bday gift for you and I think it's tommorrow right? Well, if you don't get on here tomorrow then Happy bday.
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whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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