Wondrous waterfalls
gush and splash
Pouring it all
into eart's gash
Beautiful, colorful flowers
spring into the air
as if the plowers
weren't even there
The splendor of the rain
washing uncleanliness away
relinquishing sorrow and pain
on such a hopeful day
May there be no more hurt and sadness
while observing these miracles
For God's greatness
helps to overcome many obstacles
A contest entry
- Anything you desire (1050 points in total) by Blood-Wolf.
1050 points, ended April 19, 2007, 32 entries
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Wow! So much imagery in this one! I really liked it! Hey yu know star wars fanatic(Chelsea)? She's my friend on AP. I'm Rulonda btw, I'm from Florida too. Maybe we could be friends. I'm Christian but I have no demonination.
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Wonderful poem and very well done I do not believe in god my self but this is a brilliant poem
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Ive wished since i was sensible enough to wish for sensible things, that there would be no more sadness, and that thered be no more hurt and pain. But, i somehow am dispointed so much.
Soemtimes i wish we could all see the beauty of our environment, but its usually lost.
Its a nice thought to write about
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beautifully written keep up the good work
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I love waterfalls especially when i dream of riding down them. But anyway let Wash your sins away over the waterfall and you will feal his flow in the water
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Yay!
I love it, especially the part about the waterfalls. Nice flow, but no too sing-songy. Keep up the great work and I love the break-away from your style with this.
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