Failing to blend
For so long, blinded
By the fear
You come unexpected
Like a dash of red
You paint me from within
Causing a kaleidoscope
Effect on my soul.
Like a flame it ignites
All that surrounds
Nothing is left untouched
By your soothing malcontent.
You are my contrast
I am your juxtaposition
United by your pent up rainbow
I shy away and hide
From the coolness you
Provide, is that part of the balance?
I want you to see;
How bittersweet are we?
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amazing
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wow this is a amazing write. I especially love the use of language and descriptive metaphors that you have used. And the picture adds so much impact and meaning to the poem bringing it to life.
great work
all the best -
Let me just say, the picture goes really well with the poem. This was a cool poem with a unique metaphor. Great word choice.
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This is great! and the pic is the coolist I've seen
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This is a wonderful poem! The images within a Kaleidoscope is nothing compared to your words.
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Oh so well done!!! I love your use of language in this, it jumps right off the page into the eyes of the reader!!!!!
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wow, this is a really good poem
I like this a lot
especially like:
"You paint me from within
Causing a kaleidoscope
Effect on my soul."
(^^)
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