I smiled as I watched him
take his ring as I
placed it on his finger
He smiled when he placed
mine on my own finger
Together forever
we will be
hopefully in harmany
We may go through
the rough times
But then laugh it off
because we know that
we love one another
And thats all one
every needs to survive
Together we will buy
our first home and
call it our very own
We will decorate it and
paint until we know its complete
Then one day we will make a
child of our own
and raise it together
But even with all these new
things, we will love each other
To love one another is an amazing thing
you need trust, honesty, and most of all
you must really truely love each other
So I pray for all of you getting married soon and in the furture,
think about what your doing & make sure you really love one another!
Author notes
Congrates to Titus and CountryBabe, may you forever be in each other's arms (poems)
**Sounds odd but hey go with it**
A contest entry
- Titus and Countrybabe Are Engaged....Please Help us Celebrate!! by countrybabe.
525 points, ended March 28, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you!
I will, don't worry about that.
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Thank you again! Many people have said I am wiser behyond my years
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This is a beautiful write, the words u have written here are amazing and flow gracefully!
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Thank you very much. I have been told I am way byhond my years. I am only 16 and yet you see what I have written? You see how I act upon situations (well, the people around me have, lol) but you know I am wise, wiser then I should be. In my mind I am in my twenties, ready to marry and yet still awaiting that first kiss.
I thank you deeply for your comment.
Thank you,
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An important message lies within the lines of this poem. You have written with wisdom. Well done dear poet.
Good luck in the contest.
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Thanks Ro!
It is true, it really is. My cousin has been married for two years (this weekend!) and they just had a little baby girl last July and it is wonderful to see them together.
I can't wait to find my perfect guy and get married, I'm only 16 but hey, a girl can dream can't she? -laughs- -
Very true, very true. Marriage is a very important part of someones life and those two people should really and truly love one another before taking such a big step. It is a very big decision and it should be for the right reasons. Great job Mem!
Love ya,
Ro
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Thanks!
Well, I have given marriage a lot of thought, alog with giving up you-know what after or before marruage and I know I can wait until after.
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This is an awesome poem. I like how you depict marriage as important. It's not something you just do. You have to love eachother!
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Thank you both very much! I am glad you both like it and congrates once more
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Thank you
This is lovely friend. Thank you so much for your gorgeous words and good luck to you in this contest.
Keep writing
Countrybabe
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Love is a word with the fragmentation of others that linger in a paradise surrounded by those closest
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