Crystal Blue Paint
Faded From its Days
Soggy rotten mattress
Sagging from the Past
Shattered Mirrors
Broken windows
Upturned floors
Unhinged Doors
I miss it All
The smell
The Rot
The endless Pit
Moldy Pillows
Leaky Ceilings
Nice Hot Freezer
Dirty Carpets
Dead light bulbs
Busted Fans
Squeaky stairs
Un-stuffed Bears
Blackened Flowers
Broken Pots
Dead Grass
Holes of Dirt
Dripping Sink
Green Bath Tub
Flooded Toilet
Cracked up Tile
It’s left Behind
Just in my Mind
But I wish it back
I wish it back. .
Author notes
I wrote this about a year ago.. and just stumbled across it. so I decided to upload it. :]
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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woah, why would you miss a place like this? lol, I like the style you write in and the structure is nice,
Your description is strong and that is the most important thing in your poem,
well done,
Lexy x
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well no. it's not the place it's self. it's a metaphor. Its the idea of wanting something so horrible back in your life. Like a drunk parent, or back-stabbing friend, maybe a cheating lover..
thank you for the comment.
much appreciated.
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whoa, you were in some other place with this one i can tell as i read, you did a great job, keep it flowing
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lol I don't even remember what made me write this.. but I wrote it. and it's weird.. I don't like the flow much.. but I suppose it works.
Thanks
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