I bend my stomach in half artfully
and clench my muscles just so.
I can be a whole other person
by tilting my chin to the side
and forcing myself to hurt.
Author notes
I revisited this--people think its about excercising before bed, and it isnt. I can see how y'all would get that. I think it's called Before Bedtime because it was written before bed.
But its actually about acting. I was playing a prostitute.
Please tell me what you think
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oh.....you had me fooled.....I feel pretty dense at this moment because I could have sworn that this piece was about bulimia.....any who great write, many ways to interpret this piece
great job!
Keep the pen flowing!!!
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looks like a cup with a hanfle om it ...
Phoetiquette ()lightly naming a gallery of your language usage?),
"Before Bedtime" is an opend mouth paragraph about what I gyess was ordinaey as abdominals before night-night. The sit ups fought a yawn for a minute it seemed to not slide into a laziness for gold sleepiness. Improve far away from a.m. evident with darting of
I knew of an exercise buff who did such things for about ten to 15 minutes with an area in her bedroom for gentle wind downs that emphasized maintenance, so it really made sense to me... to think it from my logic and then example. But seeing your categories, I got a wtong passion!
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This seems like it would be such a simple, descriptive moment as it occurs - yet I'm sitting here going "wow. this is one of the best short pieces I've read in a while".
Great stuff! I shall come back and read more.
- Kimmie
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