Hearts weary
Heavenly melodies
Hope rekindled
Halos shine
Hugs all around
Happiness beams
Hardships cease
Author notes
Pleiades Form Poetry
Background thanks to Maatkara
In a list
A contest entry
- Pleiades Picture Competition 1 by ShelleyA.
525 points, ended March 25, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Pleiades Form Poetry
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Holy Happy Hopping Hogs LOL very good never encountered this before works well
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I thought this was quite charming and I also applaud your tasteful combination of blue and pale blue pastel shades. Enchantant.
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with the title i immediately thinkof leonard cohen
and so many are doing a cover of that osong at the moment and have in the past. anyay... a good poem here - lots of h good job it is not s or i'd be lisping for a time
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and so it is
wonderful i love it .. it rocks and all the other Cliché's i didn't think of
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This is gentle and encouraging, a prayer, a chant...lovely. Geo
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Lovely picture and poem, KariKanari. I am enjoying all of these soft, inspirational poems, they are very soothing. MommaNut
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Lovely title. Very nice write. Good flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice. Very nice assonance. Thank you for your entry.
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Ah, this is beautiful - love the words you've chosen and the pretty background with the stunning butterflies.
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That was so beautiful, the words are just astounding, y it totally paints a picture in my mind as I read it.
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Bravo!
Oh, this is fabulous, so beautiful. You have such amazing talent, my friend. The imagery is spectacular. Wishing you all the best in the contest. This is a gold trophy winner. Hugs to you =] -
Nicely done with this form poetry. Love the progressive steps this leads the reader on. Best of luck to you in the contest
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A form poem, yay!
Very well done too. 
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ooo oo aliteration yay lol i love it its amazing how you make a short simple poem sound so amazing and inspiring. good luck hun.
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