Everyday i cry
Every hour i think of you
Every minute i wanna be with you
Every second im lost and confused
Why these feelings....
Because i love you
Unlike you
Or do you?
Please tell me
I need to know the truth
Because if you do
Then you'll have my everything.
Please tell me what you think
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great poem! i love it! i love the reppition in the first paragraph
the rhetorical question in line 5 --mucho awesome
i love the progression from line 6 to 12
"Please tell me
I need to know the truth
Because if you do
Then you'll have my everything."
I adore the last line perfect ending
soo beautiful
great job!
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This is really pretty, and I know the feelings your talking about... at one time I wanted to ask a guy the same thing... things happened then and well I gave up so yeah... Great Write, Love it...
~*~ Mystic....
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What an emotional poem you wrote here, you take the reader into your pain and what you are feeling. In so few words you captured the readers attention with your emotions and make the reader feel what you are feeling. Well done dear poet
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