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*Throwing My Life Away*

Throwing my life away
Yet all i can say
Is that im happy today

Depressed and lonley
Sad and cold
With yet no one here to hold

Crying and cutting
Screaming and yelling
Bleeding and hitting

Yet theirs only one person to blame
And that person is you.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Cherry Hades
    May 24, 2007
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    You can't blame others for how you feel.
    Was this piece supposed to rhyme? LOL


  • missin-my-Marine
    March 30, 2007
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    great

    awesome write, girl!
    i feel like this alot, good job!


  • Kristin Melissa
    March 22, 2007

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    I again love the emotion you have in your poetry, not every one has the talent to do that... Also once again I can relate... Awesome work
    ~*~ Mystic