1. been there done it got the t-shirt.
This is our daily special it contains anything in the cupboard somedays are better than others. We will loook for the finest of ingrediants to put into our creation but we may not hit your salivary glands we will guarantee that you won't be hungry.
2. mustgo.
we will be running this specail every friday it is a famous tradition that we are very proud of it contains anything that maybe left over all week long. We have came up with the name mustgo because everything in the refridgerator mustgo by friday (why because we must be thankful that we have had the oppurtunity to fill the fridge full of things all week, and we must share the wealth that soooooo many in the USA do not have the oppurtunity to do).
finally,
on sundays we will be running a special on love it is not open to everyone for only the very special people will enjoy this special it is for all the single parents who struggle to feed their children, for all the homeless people who wander how they got there, to all the struggling americans who pray every night for a better life. This is a special we offer only to the chosen ones who live a life to the best of their abilities and never judge another for choices they may have made in their lives but commend them for being the strong person they have become for overcoming their obstacles. You know who you are and if we only have a noodle for a dollar you will be here. And it will be the best dollar you ever spent just to be able to be here amongst the rest of us special and real people.
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Never seen anything else like this before, but it's still appealing
Woah, this one really sparked my eyes with oddness combined in creativity.
Your 1st name took courage to see what it meant. But, may I ask now if it means that you'd be at the food place, eat, and now, you've liked that food with that marking your brain like with a t-shirt with ordinary everyday meals to be looked at over and over? I first thought that the person'd go to the food place and save money for a t-shirt, but I think this is in-correct!
If so, then that is cute! I always plan to take my time to make sure I understand things right. The explanations to "been there done it got the t-shirt" that you gave were appreciated... do you mean that out of anything sitting in the 'lunch wagons,' recipes can be constructed out of them? I loved "We will loook for the finest of ingrediants to put into our creation but we may not hit your salivary glands we will guarantee that you won't be hungry" 'cuz a fast food stop would add lots of salt to make sure you'll pop back with hunger, but Pink's will lack that for slowing down. I care for this name, it had work put into it.
(still talking about name #1): The criteria was slightly messy because my dad would never want to tell me to call "been there done it got the t-shirt," but that's ok, at least I would have the patience and I did enjoy it haha.
Number two is my favorite, "mustgo!" This name is interesting because it holds 2 things within. 1 is that items that aren't sold in the week will be on sale on Friday. 2nd in my mind, is an advertisement saying "Must go get it before it rots!" Such a simple and yet deep idea for Pink, thank you. Criteria matched.
??? I believe your last paragraph is an extension for "mustgo." If it's some other reason, then please list in the Author Notes. I caught where you admitted that this is only for the ones that are trying their best and still struggling in this manner. Although I suggest there's hope in every day.
You know who you are and if we only have a noodle for a dollar you will be here -- i'm not quite sure about this sentence 'cause she'll be frictioning healthy food, however whole sorghum pasta may be a compromise though i have not yet looked up if it's a dietary craving but will do so soon. Considering that it should be available through different options each day of the week, the next line you presented is very sweet, that's what friends are all about: support.
Things you need to fix (not many but important):
1. Both names are spelled correctly (i.e I'm allowing "mustgo" because it's two words put together as a trademark rather than being misspelled). But in your 1st clarification, you have a total of 3 words to either be spaced out or re-spelled.
2. In your 2nd explanation, please count 4 misspellings and fix them to be ok with Spell-check. I have ok'd "soooooo" because it's an emphasis even though not in the dictionary.
3. Rule #4 asks you to not risk people commenting and using your username in my anonymous contest. In order to do that, please add "Please don't use my name in your reviews" to your author notes.
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