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Nature's call

The blossoming flowers scenting the air,
tattle tell signs of green shrubs and blades of grass
seems to appear everywhere.
The joyous singing of birds surrounds thee,
gentle winds blowing fragrances almost like
the caress of a loving kiss.
As the echo appears ricocheting from the pastures
of a stillness into a spring time mist.
The sun warms all, and prepares us for the love
of nature's call...

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I hope this isn't too short...

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  • Touchof1der silver member
    March 29, 2007

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    I like the imagery of a gentle wind blowing like the caress of a kiss... that's a tender thought and one that pulls the senses in. Thank you for taking the time and effort to enter my contest. Good luck!
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    March 26, 2007

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    The beauty of mother nature flourishes throughout your entire poem. You paint images with such beauty and with such tendernes of your pen.

    I love these lines:
    The joyous singing of birds surrounds thee,
    gentle winds blowing fragrances almost like
    the caress of a loving kiss.

    they just paint a heavely paradise.. You realy did a great job with it.

    I wish you the best in the contest..


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    March 23, 2007

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    Superb/intriguing/inspirational

    A charming write indeed. Excellant imagery, rhyme, and rhythm contributing to a very smooth flow with post card picture perfection.


  • Spiritvision angel
    March 23, 2007

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    I enjoyed this journey through spring. The imagery is great and allows us to see the life of spring.


  • grannyeri gold member
    March 22, 2007
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    Spring is here on the calendar - wish these things were actually happening here too - still snow and cold temperatures in Alberta - would like to be where your images are actually happening. Enjoyed the visuals you describe in these lines.


  • Elfin
    March 22, 2007

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    This is a beautiful piece of work, very soothing and calming, it suggests a lovely warm spring morning to me, I can almost feel the sun. Well done Darryl, I love this. VaL


  • Whoochi gold member
    March 20, 2007
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    Awesome tribute to spring...luvly imagery and visuals awakened my senses....good job, good luck...

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